Just...whatever...no idea what is this one.

Just...whatever...no idea what is this one.

A Chapter by Dani The Unreviewed
"

No clue what this means...just wrote some nonsense

"
Writin a few lines,
Atleast they're not lies.

Though they don't make much sense
Just make this feelin more intense.

Used to have a few words,
Now fear has new holds...

Shiverin cold,
Like a thousand times it was told.

Speechless, no texts...
Just regrets,

That nobody gets.

I stand at the outlets,
But still...its emptiness.

Fear, or rage?
Isn't that an empty page?

Just walk off the stage.


© 2016 Dani The Unreviewed


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Posted 8 Years Ago


Can I just take a moment to gape at the title of the poem with dreamy eyes?! It's SO COOL. And even though I know it wasn't meant to be cool, and that you were going through a difficult time, I can't help sensing you wrote/typed precisely what you were feeling then, and that makes this piece soar, Danny. I'm serious. Couldn't help reading the other comments ... Please don't close your account, again (even though all of that happened before I joined this site). This site does have people who'll welcome you - you just need to know where to look. And if you do dare to close this account, I will hunt you down in Hungary, waving the "Pinky Swear" contract in your face. *Amen* #Don'tWalkOffTheStage

Posted 9 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

oh...right...tha contract...lol.
thanks
Sally Hope

9 Years Ago

Always welcome.
I know these feelings all too well. Just don't give up. And please don't close your account again.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Okay... Yeah, i regret closing it. But i really feel unwelcomed on this site. I'm still thinkin abou.. read more
A writer

9 Years Ago

Don't leave! i want you to stay.
Loved this!! Perfect flow.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Thank you.
Whao.. Very very DEEP my friend! It does make a sense. Guess, you are hurt badly. I LOVE your poetry! Keep writing! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Destiny Dreamer

9 Years Ago

Great!! Keep writing! :) And You are WELCOME! :)
Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

I will keep writin. Though sometimes i don't have the slightest clue why.
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Added on May 31, 2015
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