Back to being heartbroken

I'm still heartbroken

Wondering.
Not dreaming,
Anger steaming,
Melting through the ice.

All the good memories...
What am i sayin? all our memories.
All of them are priceless.
Every moment,
With you everything is a wonder,
Now you are far away,
My words just sway,
Back forth...no sense...
Its all just a big suspense.

Back to seeing the city...
Just a s**t hole, full of pity.
Concrete jungle,
Without you, its all dark,
At night, demons stalk,
At day just tryin to find the way,
The way leadin to your arms.

They all forgot you so quickly,
But i wont. Whether i'm awake,
Or asleep... I dream of you.

Still wondering...
Sometimes even pondering...
How to break this ring.
With you my soul used to sing,
Now its the silence, it would ring
From day to day.
Can't find the way,
But i keep looking either way.
Without you i have no stay,
Not in this city,
Not in this life.

Reviews

[Celie Rose]

Enjoyed your poem. Very expressive and emotional piece. "Can't find the way,
But i keep looking either way." It's like the waves in the ocean. Waves come in and go back out to sea. Those emotions will continue come and go as you begin to heal. Well written. Keep writing Danny

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thanks : )

[sereenaoutloud]

This is awesome IM , strong and has such a great flow!
You can feel the longing and loneliness throughout this write!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you so much :)

[Joel Armstrong]

Loved this one .It has all the ri8 emotions, a great flow and that raw feel which makes it so powerful. This one is my favorite among ur works.Absolutely loved it

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :) :)

[B]

The absence of the one
Makes us dark
Sad
But we can only attract light by being the entire sun
By booming with love

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :)

[Vernika]

I love the flow of the poem. Great work! :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :)

[AaronFreitas]

Well penned my friend :) You shared some feelings of pain and lonesomeness in this write. You are not alone IM... I am right there with you. Love the way you express yourself... good work :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

Alas! so sad. I loved it very much. The idea of losing someone you loved to death hurts like hell. It hurts so much. And you have described everything so sadly yet BEAUTIFULLY! Keep writing!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you, means a lot. Just to clear the air...he did not die. But we can't be together...its over complicated...but my writes will reveal all of it in time. Again, thank you for reading.

[Destiny Dreamer]

You are WELCOME! and by losing I didn't mean 'death' dear. Yeah sure it will. :) :) Keep writing! :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

"The idea of losing someone you loved to death hurts like hell" thats why i though you meant death... But once again, thank you.

[Destiny Dreamer]

It's OKAY! No worries ... When you love someone to death, even a single moment without them hurts like hell! :/

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yeah, thats true.