Moment

Moment

A Chapter by Dani The Unreviewed

A moment,
On it went,
Wind blew away the tent.

Back then,
When there was many of them,
We were happy.

I've seen your blue eyes,
i looke deep inside,
And got mesmerized.

But i also remember,
The amber...
That night,
Took us for a flight.

Onto a mountain so high,
On the wings of a moment we fly.


© 2016 Dani The Unreviewed


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Beautiful ... Just beaUtiful the way you have used the words... Everything is just so perfect and Refreshing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Thank you :) :) :)
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IM, So tender and utterly beautiful. I'm so impressed by the structure, the wordplay...everything about it screams "Read me again!" My compliments. take care...dan

Posted 9 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much! :)
Awesome work IM.... I notice I always call you IM cause I don't know your real name and your one my good friends on here lol. I enjoyed your write :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

IM works just fine in the reviews lol. Thanks for your time reading this my friend. Always appreciat.. read more

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Tankcsapda, Agyarország, Germany



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