My soul

My soul

A Chapter by Dani The Unreviewed
"

I'm all alone again. Oh...wait...thats nothing new.

"
Once, it was an empire,
Now its a land of a vampire,
Seeking blood.
Long ago, before the flood...

There was light,
There was life,
Now its all just the lies of
others, who think hope never dies,
It just did.
I could belive in people,
After this tragic one,
I don't belive in anything, or anyone
My "soul" is a wreck,
In the wall, a large crack.

All I've got left,
Is a question ...?


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"Now its all just lies of those who think hope never dies". These lines struck me hard. When we go into this dark place people optimism and happiness can become this irritation. Not because we dont want people happy, but because all we can think of is reality. But this is such a dangerous place to be in. And you expressed it well. Wonderful poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Exactly!!! finally someone understands! Thank you. :) :)
Dark Poet

9 Years Ago

Not many do understand it. Youre very welcome!



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"Now its all just lies of those who think hope never dies". These lines struck me hard. When we go into this dark place people optimism and happiness can become this irritation. Not because we dont want people happy, but because all we can think of is reality. But this is such a dangerous place to be in. And you expressed it well. Wonderful poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Exactly!!! finally someone understands! Thank you. :) :)
Dark Poet

9 Years Ago

Not many do understand it. Youre very welcome!
Such an amazing write. :) I must disagree with this though... Judging from our conversation, I'd say your soul is far from being so dark. Infact many people could learn something from you. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Thank you. :) as for people learning from me...i'm not sure about that. Still, thank you so much. :)
Ow... Dear HOPE never dies. It never. As long as you keep it alive. I know it must have been very hard time. But nothing is IMMORTAL in this world. Believe me, not the Happiness nor the Pain. It will go away. As time heals wounds with a passage of time ... :) Nothing can let U down as long as U don't give it a power to let U down. Thanks for sharing your AMAZING POETRY! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Thank you.
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Destiny Dreamer

9 Years Ago

YOU ARE WELCOME! :)
Love it...you have so much emotion behind your writes IM...I agree with Dream this is different from your usually approach but still with the same raw style...Brilliant combination!!

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Posted 9 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much:)
nice new approach
way different from anything you've written before it poetry wise

keep playing with your pen and see what you come up with IM

-Dream

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 9 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
closed

9 Years Ago

No problem

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