Enough

Not everything rhymes...

In innocent eyes,
The flame of rage fries...
Enough of your lies,
No, no more cries,
No blessings from you,
Only curses i recieved,
Many you have deceived.

Out of ten million
I'm no one, another minion.
Livin in a castle,
That locks me inside,
Deep down my cell,
Death waits for me to sell.
To sell my life.

I've said a million times,
There's no justice.
Well, just for fun,
I'll make you run.
Will make justice.

Maybe you rule billions,
No, even if everyone else will flee
Time to break free!
To take a stand let it be wrong or right, for free or a fee...

To the last breath,
The final slice of bread,
Until a drop of blood left,
You wont win,
I aint gonna let you in.
This one fortress will stand,
Out of an ocean of evil,
Come, bring the devil,
Wont give in!

Had enough,
Had enough!
I'm fed up.
Ready your arms.

Got nothing to lose,
My life's a dark shadow,
All waters too shallow.
Black sky,
Not safe to fly.

Go to hell,
Sound the bell,
Maybe the devil will tell...
Your sins and judgements,
No lawyer is gonna save you,
Satan doesn't care for your money,
But he'll see, your hands are bloody.

Just hope you'll die,
Before its your time
To burn and cry.

I wish you nothing more,
Nothin other
Than what you gave me.
Cry as much, as heavy like i did,
Live like i did, in a prison,
Without any reason.

And see if you can make it.
Give in. Come on, give it.
Thats all I've heard
From your horde.

Reviews

[GreenEyedPoet]

The message in this is definitely loud and clear - you against the world.
I can totally relate to this, I feel this way sometimes too.
Great write IM.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yeah, got it right. Thanks for reading.

[GreenEyedPoet]

Welcome. :]

[Lizardo]

''Got nothing to lose,
My life's a dark shadow,
All waters too shallow.
Black sky,
Not safe to fly. ''

You are probably one of the darkest poems in the website IM. I like that.
It is a really good poem my friend, its kind of saying I have hope but I'm not trying... well at least that how I felt it. great poem, I like the rhyming by the way.
As always, a great piece IM.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you. Means a lot.

[AaronFreitas]

I love this dark write... love the metaphors in this piece also! Always a pleasure to read your writings :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you.

[AaronFreitas]

You're welcome my friend :)

[closed]

amazing metaphor and simile here

the message being pretty clear...

you against the world


superb my friend


-Dream

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you.