Loneliness

Loneliness

A Chapter by Dani The Unreviewed

I'm all alone,
No need for that tone...

I hear... everythin else is silent,
Onto a burnin pile i went.

There aint nobody.
My soul is bloody.

Its all just empty,
Now its all empty.


© 2016 Dani The Unreviewed


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I know it seems like you're alone but I promise that you aren't. I'm here for you. My soul is just as bloody and I'm trying to make up for all the self-harm I've done but I don't think I'll ever make my soul pure as it once was. Hopefully I can get close. Just remember I'm here when you feel alone.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much for everything :) i wish you the best of luck with putting things in order. And i'.. read more



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So dark...so powerful. I love your dark side... Ofcourse, not because I enjoy that you go through hell... But your dark writes are awesome. What am I mumbling about? all your writes are awesome.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I know it seems like you're alone but I promise that you aren't. I'm here for you. My soul is just as bloody and I'm trying to make up for all the self-harm I've done but I don't think I'll ever make my soul pure as it once was. Hopefully I can get close. Just remember I'm here when you feel alone.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much for everything :) i wish you the best of luck with putting things in order. And i'.. read more
I love your dark Poetry :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Another part of it... Gosh...i'm filled with this darkness.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Dani The Unreviewed
Dani The Unreviewed

Tankcsapda, Agyarország, Germany



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