:-(

:( woke up today,
There is no way
To be all okay
Without you...there is no way.
Without you i have no stay,
My poems, empty nothing to say,
My words just sway,
Until that day,
When i hold you in my arms,
I can't know if you're okay.

I look at people,
And i see masks,
They look at me,
And see nothing.

With their words,
All neighbors, and classmates,
And even counter-strike teammates
Say i'm great.
But in reality they think i'm a freak,
Without you i believe them,
Until i tell them
They all "like" and "miss" you,
And until they realise what i'd say
They would "like" me too...

But their empty hearts don't hold mercy, or love, or light.
When they see you for you,
And me for me,
Their true being will reveal itself,
And then all turns hell.

Author's Note

Today they left...i'm broken...forever.

Reviews

[Destiny Dreamer]

OH GOD, It is so HURTFUL :'( ... Love is such a BEAUTIFUL relation but everyone around us don't understand and make it worse. In this case "Love HURTS whether it's wrong or right"
Sometimes, no matter what! You can't get over the situation, like you're trap between do OR die situation. If you try to get over Him who knows he'll be there crying his eyes out, or in case you don't want to forget him forever what if he has moved on. (Just my personal thoughts, what I feel hard in love) SO I see your love's TOO STRONG to die!
I'M YOUR HUGE HUGE FAN, believe me I've seen in movies lover do everything for the lover, I've read Romeo and juliet but I've never seen TRUE LOVE like URS in this TRUE CRUEL FULL OIF INJUSTICE WORLD!!
Hats OFF!
Thanks for the amazing WRITE!!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you sooo much! i love reading your poems, and reviews :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

You are WELCOME buddy :D ... And I love love love reading Urs too! *-*

[Dani The Unreviewed]

:) :) :) lol :) star eyes cute :) :) :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

lOl .. :D ThankU!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Ur welcome :)

[Celie Rose]

Beautiful poem. Strong emotion. Well expressed. I feel the hurt and the pain. The crushing grief, anguish and the overwhelming stress."And then all turns hell." Expression of feelings is very important. Keep your head held high relief is coming. Well written. You are doing a great job. Keep writing Danny

[McBear]

:'( Very sad. Love is beautiful but, you know, it takes time to find the one and only.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

and hard to tell if it is the one. thanks :)

[McBear]

Yes, very true.

[Jeyanthi]

can't ignore that feeling....
when truth hurts... :/

[Cool Girl]

That's sad.... I love you, dearest sibling :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Love you too