There is only one god: Rock 'n roll!

There is only one god: Rock 'n roll!

A Chapter by Dani The Unreviewed
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Love rock 'n roll too.

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The guitars heal the scars,
Drums pound inside the hearts.
Bass gives the power,
Builds up a whole tower.

Speed brings a new seed,
It feeds the beast.

Give us our daily music,
Give us tomorrow,
And the memory of yesterday.

Give us what we need,
One god only, Rock 'n roll!
The stones will roll.

Rock 'n roll for life,
I'll rock till i live,
Or better off under a knife.

Gods and devils,
Poor and rich,
Believers, and faithless,
Soldiers and citizens,
Bricks and builders,
Liars and honest,
Pretty and ugly,
For once, all listen to me!
My clothes made of leather,
I've got no father,
Nor do i have a mother,
But still i have one thing left,
Rock 'n roll.

Mountains will move,
The earth will burn,
Wars will rage,
Ink will flood the page,
But rockers will always be around.
No matter what happens,
Rock 'n roll will always exist.


© 2016 Dani The Unreviewed


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Dani The Unreviewed
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I agree. I love my music. Give me Leonard Cohen, Taylor Momsen and P.J Harvey. My muses for my writing. I liked your thoughts and the reason for the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.
I wanna rock! yeah! this write is awesome :) :) :) you gotta keep writing, I love your work. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Yup :) thanks :)
A writer

9 Years Ago

Any time :)
Well written and delivered!
I don't worship rock-n-roll but I sure do enjoy it!!!
I like the energy behind this piece, it really shows
the love of Rock you have in your roll, lol!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 9 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Thanks for reading.
You can never go wrong with rock n roll. :D
Very creative write IM. I liked it!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 9 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Yeah, you are right. Thanks for reading.
It's amazing what creativity we can produce with a few instruments and on set of powerful vocals! Rock n roll will live on forever :)

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Posted 9 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Again, thank you for reading:) and i agree.
This is a rather fascinating poem. I really like the last stanza, referring to the effervescent infinity of music. I especially like the "Mountains will move, The earth will burn, Wars will rage, Ink will flood the page, But rockers will always be around." For me, this resembles the knowledge that Rock and Roll will always change the soul. Good job!

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Posted 9 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much :) yeah, rock 'n roll will ALWAYS be around.
Riversong

9 Years Ago

It sure has my support!! =D
Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Lol. Mine 2 :)
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IM, I came of age in the early '70s, the Golden Age of rock 'n' roll. When I remember events in my past I recall the music of that time, the soundtrack of my life. Over the years my OVERALL taste in music has mellowed JUST A BIT, but I'm still cut from the same cloth as Deep Purple, Led Zep, the Stones, Ozzy and Sabbath, Rush, Floyd and on and on and on...I want "Shine On, You Crazy Diamond" played at my memorial service. A great write, this piece gave me a free ride on the Way Back Machine! Thank you for that! take care...dan

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Posted 9 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :)
I'm a big rock and roll fan so I love this. Very good ode to rock and roll genre hun. :) Great write ^_^

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Posted 9 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Cool :) thank you.

like being adopted by music
neat concept

and true in the sense that music does unite us universally

loved this


-Dream

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Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

As always, i really appreciate your time and feedback. Thanks.

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