Break it if you can...

Whatevs...feeling like s**t. So i wrote this.

If nothing works,
And nobody cares,
Just scream.
When nothing can be done right,
When nobody cares...
Just scream!
Nothing and nobody cares,
Just scream!
There is no other way,
There is no better choice,
There is only s**t,
So just scream!
Nothing and nobody gives a s**t so just f*****g scream!
there is no way out,
No reason to keep going,
So just stop and scream!

Author's Note

Just wrote part of it out...

Reviews

[B]

Hey
very intense piece there

How is your day there

[Dani The Unreviewed]

thanks for reviewing. My day is messed up. How about you?

[B]

Why is your day messed up
My day is spent writing
Its quite a hobby

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Its a very very very long story... Anyways, keep writing, i like to read your work.

[B]

Can you help me out with an idea for a piece ....... Something you find worth reading about

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Sure. I can try helping you out.

[B]

Please i need it
So i need a theme ..... and do you know of any particular structure ?
I don't know much

[Dani The Unreviewed]

structures...never been good with that. I always believed that everyone can make up their own structures. Yeah, i don't really know structures. Anyhow, what do you want to write about?

[B]

I am not sure
I am extremely boring as you can tell


So help me out here

A good theme

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Right now i'm dark...but i'll try. Umm...how about love? there is always need for writing about it. Something that makes you happy. Or some wish that didn't come true...but there is possibility that someday it will. Or maybe there is someone you miss. Or a few memories. And no, you are not boring.

[B]

i wrote about all that

i need something that will be a burst of good energy
read morei wrote about all that

i need something that will be a burst of good energy

i so am

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Then you're asking the wrong guy. I have no idea what would be full of good energy. Sorry that i'm not really useful.

[B]

Hmmmmm
Give me a hobby
Something you love doing

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Listening to music, reading, cooking(Not too good at it...but hell whatever)

[B]

Cooking that sounds cool
Like cooking what ?

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Whatever you want. Well almost whatever you want... Look up hungary's traditional dishes and you'll see.

[B]

cool i will do that

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you all who stopped by. Thanks for the reviews.

[AaronFreitas]

It's amazing how much better we feel after a good scream... or in my case a manly roar! haha Awesome piece filled with emotion... stay strong my friend! You know I'm here for support anytime. :)

[closed]

Wow
This was awesome IM

sometimes it's all you can do

[Pushkar Prabhat]

WoW!!!!
powerful powerful expression........!!!!
raw emotions.......
sometimes you need to let out............scream.......
i could totally relate......just yesterday i screamed my soul out........then it was beautiful!!!
i loved it!!!
:)

[Melinda McQueen]

Yep, sometimes you just have to scream.
Truthful words.

[Cool Girl]

Î feel that way too!!!!!!!!!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you very much. Welcome to the club.

[Cool Girl]

You're welcome! And thanks ;) lol

[closed]

everyone should scream lol