Don't take away the pain

Don't take away the pain

A Chapter by Dani The Unreviewed
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Sometimes rage takes even my peaceful soul down the road. Don't take it personally.

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Scream of pain,
Another stab they claim.
They keep pushing,
Blood keeps rushing.
They want to see my tears.
All i give is a scream of pain,
And rage,
The monster on a rampage,
Making blood rain.
Don't take away the pain,
It makes me insane.
Push me one more mother
f*****g time,
And prepare to die.


© 2016 Dani The Unreviewed


Author's Note

Dani The Unreviewed
Okay...don't take this personally. Its not written for you. Its for the bloody world around me. Any thoughts about the poem are welcome.

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I can see the message of the poem upon reading this one. Thanks for sharing this other side you have . excellent writing

Posted 9 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

9 Years Ago

Thank you.
Ashadan

9 Years Ago

you're always welcome

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Added on April 26, 2015
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Dani The Unreviewed
Dani The Unreviewed

Tankcsapda, Agyarország, Germany



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