The show begins...

My life...

Born you were in the wrong time,
At the wrong place a troubling lie,
The word of crowds wishing luck,
They all want to put you under lock
Masks look down at you,
Angels wont watch over you.
All around, hate's all they give you.
Nowhere to hide, nowhere to run,
Fight you must, so take your gun.
The infernal show begins,
Your death it brings,
If you lose.
The lions are on the loose.
Don't worry for your life,
Just roll the dice,
They want to see you fight,
The arena is your stage,
You're the main actor onstage.
Spectators only tell lies,
They don't care if someone dies.
They want to see a sacrifice.
You can not afford to lose,
Or you wont get the golden goose.
The infernal show begins,
A new chance is what victory brings
From your music their ear rings,
Their soul sings,
As a wolfe because of evil things
Humanity brings.
The infernal show begins.

Author's Note

I'm hoping you like it.

Reviews

[E G TEN]

The Infernal show begins! Now that's the show I would love to watch!
I'm very happy that your not just standing but fighting as well.
I've remember your earlier writings and they were colorful, I can see
Some of those colors flourishing in again. Good job and awesome writing!
I would love to see more of this! Your friend -EG 10 ;)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you my friend:) and there is one more piece like this one...its a poem and story in one.

[E G TEN]

Sure, will do ;)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Its titled "Everyday's fight". Again, thank you very much for taking time to read and review.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Btw...you want to see the show? drop by some time, when i put on heavy metal songs with volume sky high and the neighbors yelling: turn it down. What a show that is...just kidding. Not bothering my neighbors with loud music...well there was one mean birthday party...but its a long story.

[E G TEN]

Hehehe, you go out there and enjoy!!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

I will do that tomorrow:) thanks:)

[closed]

Your most creative work so far
The arena concept is awesome

You're getting better and better as a writer my friend

-Dream

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thanks. Means a lot to me:)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

where did you go???

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Since i can't send read requests... I'd like some thoughts about this one.