Chaos

Just letting it out.

Cold, steel chains,
Bring me the pains.
In a room, i'm locked.
More of it and my mind is blocked.
They break down concret walls,
All order falls.
Chaos! My blood burns,
As fate's wheel turns.
Chaos! Mind broken,
Crazy heart of mine open.
Deafening noise of the war machine.
Another sip of sweet caffein.
A blow of smoke,
As lightning, in my lungs it stroke.
Pain they bring,
As fire surrounds me in ring.
Chaos! it screams,
Chasing away my dreams.

Author's Note

Had to let out steam.

Reviews

[CiNtsaLis]

*clears throat* (smacks lips) I won't get this correct at 100% but allow me to explain what I think- is going on.

The chains bind him/her (regardless if it is a dream/ or reality) It feels REAL in both way. It Real- regardless. He/She feels imprisoned. Through the constant "overlapping thoughts" Everything else becomes narrow. The gun shots from the wars or just the experience of the battlefield comes to life. He/She could see/ hear it so clear it's scaring him/her. He/She feels the reality of the war- entirely and even have constant "Heart Attacks" from the loud "Sounds" ; frightened by it- He/She stays awake by drinking caffein. The nightmare repeats &nd only a Cigg- could calm down the Anxiety. He/She steps out and smoke through the hurt- to make the pain less hurtful.. suddenly after smoking the cig- everything starts to fade away- It's reality again..

[Dani The Unreviewed]

thanks mom :)
it's a bit worse than that

[CiNtsaLis]

*covers mouth* D: (even worst) *hides in corner* I failed. (chuckles*) Aww, mann. *laughs* /:

[Dani The Unreviewed]

you didn't fail...lols i jus didn't make it all that obvious

[CiNtsaLis]

D; "I didn't?" *smiles again brightly* (x YAY! (*laughs*)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

no you didn't, you're still getting all my writes better than anyone :)
thanks mom :)

[CiNtsaLis]

*laughs* (*touches cheeks*) (: I'm proud hehehee

[Dani The Unreviewed]

and that with reason! :) you're my amazing mom :D

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Just had to let out some steam.