They're dealing lives, and i'm dealing led...

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They go throug the streets in their vans... Taking children from their families, taking sisters from brothers... The questions remain, why? they cause pain to many, so they can get some money? they sell lives, they give them to monsters, to feed their filthy desires, to see on their face another evil smile... Some find happiness in the tears of others, while families cry, as their loved ones die...but all they do is laugh. They think, they're invincible... Haha think again! next time i see their empty van, I'll be ready, armed with a machine gun, waiting. When night falls down on the face of the earth, when the sun hides, and the devils come out to dance, I'll be there, in the shadows, waiting. Eyes turned red, the mechanism set into hunting mode, guns armed. When they get out, to fetch their next victim, I'll be waiting, in the shadows of the victims room... They creep closer as the wild and crazy figure of death is sharpening his blade, ready to swing it, to cut their heads from their necks. The window opens... And, in comes the first. death's blade is in the air, ready to make the fatal cut... He's coming closer to his victim... Step by step, the final dance. Click~Clack my gun's armed and loaded, death raised his blade even higher, He's grinning, feeling it as life is being cut from the kidnappers. Gunfire's light flashes through the city, as lightning, the sound the rapid shots make, are accompanied by the satisfied laugh of death, and together, they accompanie the lightnings, with thunder. Bullets leave huge holes for blood to escape, and leave in a hurry, before it comes out. The bleeding pigs moan once more, as the rope of life is slipping from their grip. Their empire of filth, collapses...

Author's Note

Its not intended to be aggressive... Just that I've been hearing about people getting kidnapped.,, and the thought didn't leave me alone... The thought of something bad happeninl to my boy...

Reviews

[Colton Warr]

Listen, this is aggressive but its not over the top! And you need to be aggressive. These people are not people, they are monsters. The devils demons. And your lightning from your gun is the light of God. This had me feeling like i was watching an action movie like Taken. I was picturing Liam Nesson the whole time lol. Well done, thoughts they may be, but right they are.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thanks... But i'm not sure if we should mix god and murder to justify it...still this is what i would do to those who rape, murder and kidnapp people. I have no faith left in god, but I've read the bible... And if i recall correctly, then somewhere in it says that only god has the right to take what he gave(Meaning life). Sorry, i'm really down right now... But thats pretty much what i think.

[Colton Warr]

Perhaps you're right, we shouldn't mix God and murder. I am not as religious as I should be. But hearing Allies story has helped me a bit, but it has also created a hatred for those who do this kind of stuff. God does only have the right to take a life. And he will do so on his time. Its alright, my friend. What seems to have you down? if you don't mind me asking. If you want to private message me and talk that would be fine that way it isn't out here for everyone to see. If you don want to discuss that is perfectly fine as well.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Long story... But, thank you.

[Colton Warr]

Absolutely, my friend. If you ever want to talk or discuss, you can message me at any time. I know this life can be hard. Keep the fighting the good fight and must of all, keep writing. That is our greatest release. Until next time.

[Laya Bly Nessa]

This is really amazing and I would love to read more of your work!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Again, just letting out some excess steam... Didn't mean it to be aggressive...

[Reed]

But, you sure succeeded. Amazing write.