The rebell

Its about being ourselves, not wearing any masks.(translated from Hungarian)

You can look me in the eyes, you can size me up, you can tear me to pieces, but my soul is not afraid. I'm standing before you, this is who I am. I'm not ashamed of being the rebell I've always been. I tried to be good, didn't work out.
I realised that I wouldn't be free.
Tried to be someone else, believe me its the best for us all this way.
Let my caged heart be free. There are no laws in my crazy heart...

Author's Note

Reviews are welcome.

Reviews

[zaisham9393]

this is what I always felt,you are right let it go, be yourself.it's the best and the easiest
thing.this is something I can scream at he top of my lungs and want the world to hear it because I mean it lol.I really loved this one.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thanks :) lol sorry i accidentally deleted the previous comment...lol. Thanks again. :) now i'm a off to meet up with my boy. :) :) :)

[zaisham9393]

you're welcome :P.... enjoy :)...

[ANTO]

You really effectively convey your messages in brief writes I.M.
Thats a skill in itself. Creating concise yet good pieces is an art.
Well done
:)))

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you:)

[RiverRei]

The only correction I have is "realized" not "realised". :) I feel like this helped me get to know you a little better, haha. I liked this very much. Write more about you, I wanna feel what you feel and such! :) Thanks for sharing!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thanks:) I'll write more in time.

[E G TEN]

Now this is Bad A*s writing! Very cool man" a Rebell would be something I can relate to. Thanks for sharing!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

You are welcome. Its still in progress. And thanks for reviewing. :)

[sereenaoutloud]

nicely done! It can be so hard to break free from the chains that hold us down!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thanks everyone:) For reviewing and understanding the meaning of it. :)

[andrew mitchell]

Another clever write IM Like animals they live life to the fullest when free not in zoos and so is the heart not to be caged . a good write good message

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thanks for reviews :)

[Cool Girl]

I always wear a mask..
I'm working on trying to show the true me :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you for reviewing:)

[Cool Girl]

You're welcome!!

[closed]

nice
i think we've all felt this way before
that instinctive desire to deny authority, norm or convention

thanks for sharing


-Dream

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you for reviewing:)