Bittersweet waiting...

A very big thank you to Cool Girl, my best friend. Without her encouragement, and time spent on hearing me out, this wouldn't come to life... at least not like this.

I'm waiting for tomorrow
Waiting to look into his
blue eyes,
into the eyes, that are always full of wonder.
waiting,
so I can hold him close,
hold him tightly, with my strong arms, providing warmth to both of us,
as I brush his beautiful blonde hair,
so very carefully
with my fingertips.
waiting
So I can tell him
that I love him,
so I can show him,
that I love him.
Waiting
To take a breath of air,
just so I can tell him
all over again,
that I love him.
To tell him, that he is the reason I wake up,
to tell him, that one moment in his arms, is worth more than anything.
One moment in his arms is worth more than everything.
The world is nothing,
when I look at him,
the sun is not shining
the earth does not spin,
time does not move,
all of it waits for him to approve.
His smile is the source of happiness,
It casts away the sadness.
To kiss him once more,
so he wants even more.
To give him the world,
to let him hold me,
so I want more,
I love him for shore.
To see his smile,
To make him smile,
To hold him,
to kiss him,
to say what I told him,
all over again,
I love him.
To say that life is nonsense without him.
To tell him all this,
with one sweet kiss.

Author's Note

The ode of my boyfriend. Hope you enjoyed:)


Ah I remember the energy, creativity he put into me back then... It is amazing.

Reviews

[E G TEN]

Nice work, you never seems to disappoint me " to give him the world, to let him hold me, so I want more, I love him for shore, " no I hope the word " shore" is not a typo because if it ain't,, then it's a stroke of genius!! Excellent job!!! Keep it coming ;)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you. And I thought people will judge me because of this one. But yay they didn't... so far:)

[andrew mitchell]

A sweet message of longing for a loved one. a nice poem of missing, longing and expression of devotion

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thanks for stopping by and reviewing. :)

[RiverRei]

So sweet :) I have this feeling with my boyfriend as well :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you:)

[Octavious]

I admire your writing technique, this was very well developed :)

[sereenaoutloud]

This is beautiful, i love how it is all to be conveyed "with one sweet kiss". Great write that flows effortlessly!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yup:) Thanks for reviewing. :)