A very big thank you to Cool Girl, my best friend. Without her encouragement, and time spent on hearing me out, this wouldn't come to life... at least not like this.
I'm waiting for tomorrow
Waiting to look into his
blue eyes,
into the eyes, that are always full of wonder.
waiting,
so I can hold him close,
hold him tightly, with my strong arms, providing warmth to both of us,
as I brush his beautiful blonde hair,
so very carefully
with my fingertips.
waiting
So I can tell him
that I love him,
so I can show him,
that I love him.
Waiting
To take a breath of air,
just so I can tell him
all over again,
that I love him.
To tell him, that he is the reason I wake up,
to tell him, that one moment in his arms, is worth more than anything.
One moment in his arms is worth more than everything.
The world is nothing,
when I look at him,
the sun is not shining
the earth does not spin,
time does not move,
all of it waits for him to approve.
His smile is the source of happiness,
It casts away the sadness.
To kiss him once more,
so he wants even more.
To give him the world,
to let him hold me,
so I want more,
I love him for shore.
To see his smile,
To make him smile,
To hold him,
to kiss him,
to say what I told him,
all over again,
I love him.
To say that life is nonsense without him.
To tell him all this,
with one sweet kiss.
Nice work, you never seems to disappoint me " to give him the world, to let him hold me, so I want more, I love him for shore, " no I hope the word " shore" is not a typo because if it ain't,, then it's a stroke of genius!! Excellent job!!! Keep it coming ;)
I love this. It's a huge part of your past and you were passionate about the subject. You just need to find that passion again... I mean your cat does look pretty awesome you could write a poem about him or about the sunset just stop for a moment and feel. Let those feelings out on paper. Don't care about what everyone thinks because that defeats the purpose of writing.
then I shouldn't even be on a writing site, which was supposedly about what others think of your wri.. read morethen I shouldn't even be on a writing site, which was supposedly about what others think of your writing o.O
lol. eh...I wrote some song lyrics about you...still waiting for me to translate them.
Hey cute face! :) Congratulations on your award! I love this poem, I read it like four times today. I love it, how it all comes down to one sweet kiss. I love it, and you too, Gorgeous. :)
Oh my dear God!!!!!! Now, I am melting away. This is just gorgeous. How it all comes down, to one sweet kiss. You always amaze me my dear friend. This poem speaks of love. Love that is meant to be, one that is meant to be forever. I love this entire poem, no favorite lines, because all are my favorite lines. Anyone you write about my friend, is blessed. Keep writing, and I will be reading.
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