The Soul Of Man
A Poem by
Dann Stack
I know with utmost certainty That light and dark are same. They've fought for all eternity On my soul's unbroken plain. Yin and Yang, you've heard it all when light and dark collide. But always one must fall we must always pick a side. But who can say the soul of man is so easily decided? When every day his hopes and plans with life, they are collided. Who are you to tell me if my soul is dark or light? Who are you to tell me what is wrong and what is right? For my soul is neither good or bad it is simply alone. And still with all the things i've had, this house is not a home. There is no dark or light, there is just you and me. So forget about wrong and right, and follow what you see
© 2013 Dann Stack
Reviews
i like the simplicity and the concept
this stanza really brought it together well:
"But who can say the soul of man
is so easily decided?
When every day his hopes and plans
with life, they are collided"
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
A well written poem...Thank you for sharing...:)....................
Posted 10 Years Ago
A well written poem...Thank you for sharing...:)....................
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Brilliant flow to this poem! Great writing!
Posted 11 Years Ago
Brilliant flow to this poem! Great writing!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you! flow has always been my strong point.
Nicely done...nice flow and rhythm...Rose
Posted 11 Years Ago
Nicely done...nice flow and rhythm...Rose
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
thank you. i've always had a talent for rhyme. though there are a few lines i'd like to change to ma.. read more thank you. i've always had a talent for rhyme. though there are a few lines i'd like to change to make them flow better, personally.
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Added on August 26, 2013
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