It was Beautiful but Turned Bad

It was Beautiful but Turned Bad

A Poem by Dani Eiri
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It was all just a dream for a lover boy :3

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A year went by in a blink.
I came to you
and we conceived.
You then come home;
Come home with me.
Our beautiful baby came;
Came just in time for Christmas.

Waking from this heavenly dreaming,
To reality I was angered.

© 2012 Dani Eiri


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i liked how it was short but concise, and i especially liked the ending
good job

Posted 11 Years Ago


Dani Eiri

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much for taking the time to make a review. I am glad you liked it!

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Dani Eiri
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17 year old girl with a passion for Iceland and Japan. Knows little 日本語 (Japanese) and Íslenska. LDR with a handsome man living in Ísland. Artist/Author. https://.. more..

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