Rain

So simple it needs no descripton!

            Rain

 

 

Tap tapping at my window Paine

 

Dripping down, touching the ground!

 

Softly singing a sweet song.

 

It makes things grow and put on

A show.

 

Just sitting and watch it flow.

 

Sometimes cold it and yet too soft to hold

 

In a summer storm I feel warm.

 

Rain is happy and sad, it drips down

Like a tears from my cheek.

 

When I am feeling small and meek.

 

So look outside and take a peek!

 

If a heavenly moment is what you seek!

 

 

Reviews

[Chaos Stone]

i like your fun little poems dani
and how you notice the little things and explore every aspect of them, no matter how small
i like 'Rain is happy and sad, it drips down
Like a tears from my cheek. ' good, simple metaphor, which adds depth and emotion. but i feel this work is unfinished or u could say more, perhaps add more detail, such as why people take a peek, or what theyre peeking.
its fun and a good idea to move on to new works, which i have a problem doing sometimes, but you dont want to forget older ones. sometimes comes back to something and reading it fresh and like new, will give you new ideas.
might want to touch up the grammar a bit though
great job