Almighty

Here "they" are peoples who are corrupt or against humanity and "you" is the creator of the universe

They have won

you have killed all ours crafting skills

thats once painted your empty canvas

with bigger hopes and brighter colors

with tender smile and gentle cares

They have won

we hv lost the way back home

the demons infested on those towns

that once rebelled for negativity

where we hoisted the flag of forgiveness

where every step away was a home

where birds doesn't look for shelters

where peoples doesn't judge others on hardtimes

where crowd does mourn for someone's loss

They have won

they slashed us, the resistance

with the sword you gave them

Yes they have won

bcos almighty you let them

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thematically i really like this...i would refrain in poetry from the texty kind of language in spots...
such serious topic...and lots of strong emotion...but keep the writing formal and the tone comes across better...
j.