Endless

I hv never wished a lot but just a little
a part of a star not a whole galaxy!



footprints of success are all over the town
which way to follow,m still in doubt...



Wind blows nd a fire burst
quench the need inside me
or left me to die of thirst!



An ecstasy now piercing the depth of me
finding a space to hold insecurities!



An evil with a devotion
A heartless man with emotions
hangin in between with the cliche questions
vision blurs or focus perfection!

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Danish... I love the poetic depth of your
poem. You have the gift of rhyme that flows
effortlessly. truly, Pat

[D]

Heh... Certainly a,good one.
like the slight darkness lingering above the words...

my favorite line " A heartless man with emotions" so ironic, isn't it?
well penned.

[danish]

thanks yes its very ironic!

[D]

You're welcome :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love the theme of this...but not fond of the text language...want to see standard English in those spots...
but i really like "emotions hanging in between with the cliche questions"---

sometimes we just can't let go of those insecurities...

jacob

[danish]

thnx for the review i wish a better piece nxt tym!!

[Sami Khalil]

"An ecstasy now piercing the depth of me
finding a space to hold insecurities!"

My faves in this wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing Danish...:)./................

[danish]

thnx for ur review!!

[Sami Khalil]

Ur welcome...:)......