Glitters of Hope

Once hope saved ur life u depends on it for your entire life!!

I hv been once invited by the glitters of hope

sparkled into the depth of my ardent soul

poured its spectrum illuminated my bones

reflected my oblivious, achromatic shadow

to emanate me succor from an inert life..

But it left me with my haughty nature

the traces frightened me, leading me to relive

the sinful life that existed once

m showing the signs of a felon again

know that glitters can aid me back to asylum

beseeching the place that fosters me

brings joys to life or dead to live

hoping the lights will help me again

but the glitters of hope never came!!

Author's Note

ignore grammar

Reviews

[Gamitsuki]

NiCe....!! You have given a good writing with this poem. It's like you are feeling insecure and want someone to protect you. If in poetic words I say it:

In the seas of loneliness,
I searched the one,
the one to protect me.
To protect me from the 'World'
the 'World is a place of terrors
and terrors, the imagination of mind.
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but I would like to give yo a little piece of advice........I suppose if ou just wrote this poem once and posed here....that's wrong.....you must have re-edited it again and again so as to polish the poem to beauties. But again......it's your poem.....you r the one that has the rights to do whatever you like....it is a good write........

[danish]

thanx for the advice your cmmnts help me get better!!

[Gamitsuki]

again.....it is my pleasure to help........no prob....

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write. Thank you for sharing...:):)... .....