3 haiku

A Poem by daninstockholm

Not an attempt at perfect form, but old writing that I found and thought to share,,

Dead as man can be

The casket lowered to earth

Life ends as it starts

The morning begins

Uneasy we rise from bed

The alarm insists

Cars fly down the road

We don’t notice them, busy

Making love in the back seat

© 2015 daninstockholm

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katie

I always love how haikus can immortalize a moment. Wonderful pieces!

Posted 9 Years Ago

Kelly Scheppers

Those older pieces are moments of lost joy...they take us back to who we were and where we came from, just like an old friend.

It's hard to resist a Haiku...thanks for sharing, Dan!

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

Thank you Kelly!! It is fun to look at one's old work once in awhile, if for no other reason than to.. read more

Gee

Nice Dan,last one made me titter.

Posted 9 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

9 Years Ago

haha,, thank you my friend!! I appreciate it very much!!

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Added on October 6, 2015
Last Updated on October 6, 2015

Author

daninstockholm

Stockholm, Sweden

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Time gives us moments made up of empty canvasses. How will you use yours? Happily married male, American born but now happy to be living in Stockholm, loves to learn and experience new things new p.. more..

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