Empty Roses

She picked the flowers out immediately

The vase on the table next to the carafe

She acted happy to get them

Their innate promises

Had disappeared long ago

Reviews

[Katerobber]

Very light with an excellent undertone of sadness. I loved it.

[daninstockholm]

Thank you so much!!

[SleeplessVolcano]

Tenderness mixed with a pinch or two of sadness........

When roses become empty, life's music stops.

Beautifully written!

[daninstockholm]

Thank you so much! You really got what I was writing about!

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I can see her beautiful hands like wings full of flowers. I realy like it very nice.

[daninstockholm]

Thank you very much my friend!! I appreciate it very much!!

[jeannemarie coulter]

very thought provoking poem...i enjoyed the read and the thoughts it formed

[daninstockholm]

Thank you so much, Jeannemarie!! I appreciate your kind words!

[Kelly Scheppers]

I'm a sucker for roses...or flowers in general...for no occasion. They have a tendency to melt me, no matter what it is I'm feeling.

I love the feel to this, Dan. It very much pulls at the heart for me.

[daninstockholm]

Thank you so much, Kelly. I love giving roses as well 🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹🌹. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Your kindness means a great deal to me.