I Will See Nothing

I Will See Nothing

A Poem by daninstockholm

I will see nothing
But the children of peace
Their hair spread against the wind
Like the wings of angels

I will hear nothing
From the tombs of your dead
But the voices from my own thoughts
Like the salve of the ages

I will not open my door
To you as a visitor
Bringing your unrepentant anger
To my thirsty soul

I will no longer dance
With you parents of war
Your darkness blots out
The light from my feet

I will not see your world
Nor read your newspaper
Not hear your symphony
I will not say your prayers
But those which I make myself
The words of empowerment
The songs of unison

I will not drink at your table
I will not eat of your meat
You have no nourishment
To offer such a one as I

The end of the world
As you know it
Will be our only salvation

I will not die
Until we, all of us,
Can die under peaceful skies
Our souls drifting quietly across the sunset
Like a shroud of the finest linen

 

© 2015 daninstockholm


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The humanity you showcase here is truly empowering to those who read it. It must make you proud for having written it so well!

I tip my hat to you, dear friend!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

daninstockholm

9 Years Ago

Thanks, Kelly! I do rather like this one and wish all my work was this good,, lol. oh well, maybe s.. read more
Oh WOW !! "Standing Ovation" for sure..BravO !!! Excellent Job! glad I had a chance to stop by to read.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

daninstockholm

9 Years Ago

i'm more than flattered,, thank you so very much for your kindness!!
what a work, loved this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

daninstockholm

9 Years Ago

thank you so much,, you honor me with your kindness!
FaeryQueen

9 Years Ago

humbly..........
Such a defiance in this piece, very strong and powerful.
Nice work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

daninstockholm

9 Years Ago

yes, it is defiant, but hopefully in a positive way,, Thank you very much for your kind words! I .. read more
Cherry Pepperweb

9 Years Ago

Yes, in a positive way. :)
You're welcome!
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Very dark and deep like wound from sharp sword. You make more than great.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

daninstockholm

9 Years Ago

Thank You so very much! It is a deep poem, I guess,, seems most of mine are,, I'm delighted You like.. read more
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9 Years Ago

I LOVE IT I AM DELIGHT
great depth and brilliant metaphors in this wonderful write! well done! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

daninstockholm

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much!! This means a lot to me!
Indra Neil

9 Years Ago

u r welcome! :)
Truly a beautiful poem! It had a really nice flow to it! can't wait to read more of your work :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


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daninstockholm

9 Years Ago

Thank you thank you thank you!!! I'm very happy you like it! After reading yours, I'm truly honore.. read more
GPR

9 Years Ago

You're welcome :D

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Added on July 27, 2015
Last Updated on July 27, 2015
Tags: war, children, grief, anti-war, humanity, protest, poetry, writing, poem, growth, empowerment, refusal, revolution

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daninstockholm
daninstockholm

Stockholm, Sweden



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Time gives us moments made up of empty canvasses. How will you use yours? Happily married male, American born but now happy to be living in Stockholm, loves to learn and experience new things new p.. more..

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