I will see nothing But the children of peace Their hair spread against the wind Like the wings of angels
I will hear nothing From the tombs of your dead But the voices from my own thoughts Like the salve of the ages
I will not open my door To you as a visitor Bringing your unrepentant anger To my thirsty soul
I will no longer dance With you parents of war Your darkness blots out The light from my feet
I will not see your world Nor read your newspaper Not hear your symphony I will not say your prayers But those which I make myself The words of empowerment The songs of unison
I will not drink at your table I will not eat of your meat You have no nourishment To offer such a one as I
The end of the world As you know it Will be our only salvation
I will not die Until we, all of us, Can die under peaceful skies Our souls drifting quietly across the sunset Like a shroud of the finest linen
The humanity you showcase here is truly empowering to those who read it. It must make you proud for having written it so well!
I tip my hat to you, dear friend!
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thanks, Kelly! I do rather like this one and wish all my work was this good,, lol. oh well, maybe s.. read moreThanks, Kelly! I do rather like this one and wish all my work was this good,, lol. oh well, maybe someday
Such a defiance in this piece, very strong and powerful.
Nice work.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
yes, it is defiant, but hopefully in a positive way,, Thank you very much for your kind words! I .. read moreyes, it is defiant, but hopefully in a positive way,, Thank you very much for your kind words! I appreciate it very much!
Very dark and deep like wound from sharp sword. You make more than great.
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank You so very much! It is a deep poem, I guess,, seems most of mine are,, I'm delighted You like.. read moreThank You so very much! It is a deep poem, I guess,, seems most of mine are,, I'm delighted You like it!!
Truly a beautiful poem! It had a really nice flow to it! can't wait to read more of your work :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you thank you thank you!!! I'm very happy you like it! After reading yours, I'm truly honore.. read moreThank you thank you thank you!!! I'm very happy you like it! After reading yours, I'm truly honored by your kindness.
Time gives us moments made up of empty canvasses. How will you use yours?
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