Serenity

Serenity

A Poem by Daniielle7

soft and slow the rain drops slip down skin

beating down to the sound of a broken violin

and im floating in a cloud of peaceful bliss

as angels encompass me with their sweet kiss

and the sunshine warms me into a serene place

as the cool winds and my bare body interlace

and im peacefully drifting back down to earth

to fall into calm ocean waters in my rebirth

breaking the surface and tasting the soft air

reaching the shore i drop down in prayer

thank you god for this air, water, and sand

for you ill always strongly stand.

© 2011 Daniielle7


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Beautiful poetry...I always praise God, always thankful through good and the bad times...this poem reminds me of that, to remain faithful. Excellent Danielle.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Echoes of waves walking ashore... and sun motes dancing in the eyes...

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautiful!!

very nicely done....i have felt that way before myself....

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TO be at one with nature is the best way to achieve peace and happiness... such a blissful poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Sweetly sanguine...your words are sincere and very welcome in this place.

Nice work...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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how beautiful is this....feels like a soul coming from heaven falling into this new surrounding and appreciating all the good stuff about it. the title is perfect because that how it made me feel.. excellent write!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautifully worded... love this poetry

Posted 13 Years Ago


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very beautiful.

well done indeed.
the rhyming is sublime

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Such a tender piece to read. Thank you for sharing this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I tend to reach for the stars, for lack of better words. My hopes are too high and my dreams are too big according to societal ways. And if there is one thing I've learned throughout my life it's not .. more..

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