Serenity

soft and slow the rain drops slip down skin

beating down to the sound of a broken violin

and im floating in a cloud of peaceful bliss

as angels encompass me with their sweet kiss

and the sunshine warms me into a serene place

as the cool winds and my bare body interlace

and im peacefully drifting back down to earth

to fall into calm ocean waters in my rebirth

breaking the surface and tasting the soft air

reaching the shore i drop down in prayer

thank you god for this air, water, and sand

for you ill always strongly stand.

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

Beautiful poetry...I always praise God, always thankful through good and the bad times...this poem reminds me of that, to remain faithful. Excellent Danielle.

[Chris]

Echoes of waves walking ashore... and sun motes dancing in the eyes...

[Kyle]

This is beautiful!!

very nicely done....i have felt that way before myself....

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

TO be at one with nature is the best way to achieve peace and happiness... such a blissful poem.

[Forest Green]

Sweetly sanguine...your words are sincere and very welcome in this place.

Nice work...

[MAC]

how beautiful is this....feels like a soul coming from heaven falling into this new surrounding and appreciating all the good stuff about it. the title is perfect because that how it made me feel.. excellent write!

[shoaib]

beautifully worded... love this poetry

[piggy]

very beautiful.

well done indeed.
the rhyming is sublime

[tigerclaw]

Such a tender piece to read. Thank you for sharing this.