Beyond it All

Beyond it All

A Poem by Daniielle7

i cant find the line between right and wrong, im tired of fighting.

the fires roaring in a hot blaze, melting the ice its so inviting.

and im gazing towards the door, wishing i didnt have to choose

wishing you never had the chance to abuse my thoughts and misuse

your words to accuse me of lies and broken promises to confuse

my heart and bruise my soul, and leave me feeling damaged and used.

why dont you try taking a walk in my shoes?

but i refuse to let you be amused or excuse your actions and views

and you taught me so well to misuse 

and now all youre good for is being my muse.

© 2011 Daniielle7


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i can dig it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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filled with your emotions and attitude i find this a good "send off" piece. write hime away and write something happy to move on sort of thing. great write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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hahah gotta love girl power :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like how you said (why dont you try taking a walk in my shoes) i like it because you fighting back girl power oh yeah

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I tend to reach for the stars, for lack of better words. My hopes are too high and my dreams are too big according to societal ways. And if there is one thing I've learned throughout my life it's not .. more..

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