Beautiful Release

Oh how the distant thunder loves to shake the ground.

And how the rain almost never stops pouring down.

The dark clouds never seem to fade away,

But for a rare moment sunshine finds its way.

And everything looks absolutely divine,

The moment when beauty and pain intertwine.

Like a radiant rose with thorns on its stem,

Or like an unblunted lustering gem.

And oh how it is an extravagant scene,

Not beauty not pain but in between.

Reviews

[chrisdavid]

This is a beautiful piece! The imagery is first class and the rhyme and flow excellent. You make a great point. The sunshine does make everything seem divine! I HATE the rain!!! Lovely work. I'm new here so just discovered you! I'm impressed! Looking fab in photo too!
Take care, Chris.

[sonceotrok]

You got the gift Danii
Make us proud o ya

[Daniielle7]

thanks everyone !

[reminder]

Very soothing and lyrical. I love the imagery of the contradiction of a storm. Well done!

[Kelley]

This was a beautiful poem Daniielle and I loved how you ended it.
Keep up the great work and thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Very well written, such beauty you you wrote about!

[Charles D. Moorer]

Nicely done, though I usually don't like poem with this particular rhyme scheme, you manage to pull this one off, though the last two lines are a little weak and leaves one expecting more.

[Im His Daughter]

ohhh love this one.. you are good