Temptation

my soul is sore, baring the pain of my sin

but your touch soothes the burns within

yet the affliction of good and evil persists

the tangle of temptation one must resist

the raw soul to soul interlace of perfection

continues to mirror both souls reflection

the severity of the beauty will never perish

when one holds all the other has to cherish

Reviews

[Ronn Michael Salinas]

you mean to say "bearing", right? the tone is split in two, from involved to detached/didactic. how about changing "one" to "I" or "you"?

[Charles D. Moorer]

This piece reflects the price of being human!

[Im His Daughter]

great insight... love this one