Frustration

kill me with a delicate touch
encompass my throat in your clutch
slowly draw my breath from my soul
slit the heart with precision and control
red rose pedals seep from the gash
hit the air and disintegrate ash by ash
salty blue rain drops seep from the sky
salty blue rain drops seep from the eye
pain slowly twists into bliss
and at last death's sweet kiss

Reviews

[Adam :P]

love the imagery, liked the poem,

[Charles D. Moorer]

Wondeful imagery as the last breath draws near.

[Im His Daughter]

you have a way with poems.. almost song like.. i hear a rap tune for sure..