Soul

Have you ever fallen down to the ground

and let the raindrops silence all the sound?

Pictured the world without you in it,

or wondered what it would be like to just quit?

Cool drops slide down pale skin,

Cool drops soothe the pain within.

Drip. drop. drip, drop, drop.

Slip. splat. sip that, stop.

Gentle winds stir up mixed feelings,

Clouds darker releasing their healings.

Closed eyes, spinning down to the ground,

It is when I am lost, that I am found.

Eyes open, becoming one with the sky,

The souls released when allowed to cry.

Sparks and flames and fire ignite

A flash of light and back to the night.

Reviews

[Chris]

Good tone, smooth flow. Strong thoughts to follow along.

[Onlyme]

Soul search read. That really takes you inside your mind and heart as well. Wonderful read.

[dead letter office]

sounds like silent tears,
searching for a flame
to light the night

[Re-Pete]

great stuff. i really like this soul searching write. it's wonderful ... :)

"Not until we are lost do we begin to understand ourselves." - Thoreau