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Long and far away I have dreamed of you

And each year that passed you remained a hazy blue

A faint hope hanging on a thread of the razors hue

Fallen from damaged hands wanting to hold something new

 

Despite my alleged petulant dark

Despite thousands of dirty teeth trying to tear me apart

 I always knew of you as my fresh start

My wry eyed devil and my beating heart

 

You and I are quite possibly the same

One tortured soul differentiated only by two names

Paralleled and riddled with unwarranted shame

An incomplete picture held together by an unfinished frame

 

Your beauty, it has bemused me

Your hands, they have set me free

I owe my life, my honor, my being

To you who gave me my wings

 

We’ve molded our flesh and created a beautiful sin

Complete with sodden sheets and whispering limbs

Our eyes burning deep, in yours, my home forever herein

And together we will watch the world end

Reviews

[KeeD]

"One tortured soul differentiated only by two names." Really loved the creativity and impact of this line. Great stuff.
You and I are quite possibly the same
One tortured soul differentiated only by two names
Paralleled and riddled with unwarranted shame
An incomplete picture held together by an unfinished frame
This whole stanza was magnificent.
You write like a seasoned writer, looking forward to reading more of your work as soon as you upload it. This poem was beautiful and wrapped in security and emotion.

[Shadenfräu]

Thanks a lot! This particular piece means a lot to me, so it feels good that others find an appreciation in it. I enjoy reading your stuff as well (or what I've read so far) and I too look forward to reading more of your work.

[Lupus Kaos]

"I owe my life, my honor, my being

To you" I liked this line as it expresses my thoughts of someone who has been in my life in the past, yet her presence still has an effect on me. Nice poem, really beautiful.

[Shadenfräu]

It is a beautiful thing when something or someone has had such a profound effect on you, that you can't imagine how life would be if they were never in your life. Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it.