Andromeda

Dedicated to all of those who feel unloved

Andromeda

 

Underneath a shroud of gray you lie wide awake

Gazing up at a night sky full of Magnetars

As you try so hard to find your own place in interstellar space

And somebody to hold you closely in their arms

 

All you know are sunspots and halos

And the unblinking stare of disregard

But I want you to know you are not unknown

And that to me you are perfect the way you are

 

Like a majestic comet in the sky up above

You hypnotize this world with your celestial glow

All you want is for love to touch the fields through which you run

For somebody to save you from this black hole

 

All you know are sunspots and halos

And the unblinking stare of disregard

But I want you to know you are not unknown

And that to me you are perfect the way you are

 

You feel like you’re lost on a never-ending cold, lonely road

And that you are trapped in the valley of pale, lunar light

You don’t even know you shine like the hyper novae of the cosmos

And mesmerize the whole world with the solar storm in your eyes

With you there’s nothing wrong at all

 

All you know are sunspots and halos

And the unblinking stare of disregard

But I want you to know you are not unknown

And that you’ve been loved since you were born

Author's Note

I feel like this is weaker than my usual writing. Regardless, tell me what you think! :)

Reviews

[Katie]

I love this poem !!!!! :)

[DoormanDan]

Thanks, Im really glad you liked it!! :)

[Valentine]

Love the picture and the vague description of all of us on earth. None of us feel like we are that special all of the time. Many times we wonder just what we are and why we are placed in this universe. Valentine

[DoormanDan]

Thanks for taking the time to review this! :)

[Lizardo]

It's not weak! This is awesome and I love the name
As always you are a great writer, and his story proofs it
Really good poem!

[DoormanDan]

Thanks Lizardo, I'm glad you liked it!:)

[Lizardo]

You are welcome! You should put this one in our group

[DoormanDan]

I already did :)

[ayejodie]

I loved this, so simply beautiful :)

[DoormanDan]

I really appreciate your review! Thanks! :)

[Cool Girl]

It's not weaker, it's just different:) I really like it, especially the part "You are not unknown." Great job, and thanks!

[DoormanDan]

You''re welcome :)