Toy Maker

A poem about the Imagination

Toy Maker

Welcome to my universe of sapphire tidal waves

Where whispering Willows pirouette all night and day

Where I can hold the stardust paintbrush for as long as I stay

In this glistening world of silver rain I can escape

From the bloody battlefields of fate-to plains of Primrose

To a vast kingdom of champagne lakes-and singing oaks

This is my fantasia, my continent of endless euphoria

My wondrous, magical emporium

Welcome to the galaxies residing behind my eyes

The utopia existing outside of space-time

Where auroras scorch the purple sky

And I have the power to hold their light

Here the night shines with the energy of one thousand quasars

Author's Note

I really enjoyed writing this one because the topic the poem's about meant I could literally put ANYTHING in the poem and it would make sense, since anything can happen in the human mind. As usual, tell me what you think! :)

Reviews

[Cool Girl]

Haha, I could definately see you being excited while writing this XD
I love this poem because of the topic and everything else:)
I think it's safe to say this was AMAZING!!! I mean, Lizardo thought it was amazing also, so it has to be...

12 imaginary brownies for this one....

Your friend,

C.G.

P.S.

Ran out of cookies also..
Sorry, Under Cover Cookie Monster :P

[DoormanDan]

Imaginary brownies make me a happy pac man. Thanks for the kind words :)

[Cool Girl]

You are very welcome! Hope they boosted your confidence:)

[DoormanDan]

They did( while also satisfying my hunger)

[Cool Girl]

haha good:)

[Playing with Demons]

Wow. There are really no words....this poem is utterly beautiful. The descriptions are flawless and you portrayed your excitement very well!
Very nice job!

[DoormanDan]

You think so? Im really glad you like it! This poem was the most enjoyable one for me to write :)

[Playing with Demons]

Its seemed link a lot of fun haha

[Tasfia Islam]

Ahh, I entered your world and its amazing... (lol) :D I could feel your excitements while writing this... Its really great...

[DoormanDan]

Thanks for reviewing this Annabelle, Im glad you like it! :)

[Tina Kline]

I love it. Very grand and full of beautiful enchanting images. Who wouldn't want to go visit this place or perhaps even stay?

[DoormanDan]

There are times where I wish I could just stay there all day, such as after putting up with an algebra test lol. I'm really glad you liked it. I really enjoyed writing it :)

[Tina Kline]

You are very welcome.

[willweb]

My friend, this is fantastic. So many visions you have created in my mind. I like the whimsical feel of this with just a few dark patches to keep us guessing. Very nicely penned.

[Lenah Mehzabin]

Ow I loved it! this one is really awesome as a imaginary and i liked the style of presentation . Beautiful choice of words . Great work!

[Workvio]

A beautiful adventure into that inner sanctum of the human heart via the muse of poetic imagination ...

[DoormanDan]

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for taking the time to review my writing! :)

[lydie]

I really love this poem, it is unique and, like Cool Girl, I could see how you would be excited about writing this, as I would. I love how you changed the font and color. This really is a great poem.

[DoormanDan]

Thanks for reviewing! unique is how i try to make all of my poems :)

[Valentine]

Add a little paint to that stardust paintbrush and picture for all a golden new year..Nice one. Valentine

[DoormanDan]

I appreciate the review! Happy new year! :)

[Amber Lily]

I love the imagination in this! So many possibilities to draw with every word said. Great job! :)

[DoormanDan]

Thats the reason i loved writing it! Thanks for reading this Amber! :)

[Katie]

I loved reading your poem!:)

[DoormanDan]

I love reading your writing as well! I'm glad you liked this :)