Psychopath's Masquerade

Written from the perspective of the insane

Psychopath's Masquerade

Come on come all, it is time to take the fall

Black stallions lurk behind these asylum walls

We bring to this world Opals white and red

Because we all want to see some bloodshed

We are known as the forsaken and the damned

Take my hand and I'll show you a better land

Welcome to the psychopath's masquerade

Here heaven and hell are the same

Tonight we join the ranks of Hade's Parade

And let Disaster play her favorite game

We see crimson vines and chalk outlines

Don't you worry, everything will be fine

Because Anarchy's opened his beautifully ugly eyes

Say goodbye as we dance underneath the pale moonlight

Welcome to the psychopath's masquerade

Here heaven and hell are the same

Tonight we join the ranks of Hade's parade

And let Disaster play her favorite game

In our dreams we're surrounded by gas masks

We watch as destruction claims everything we have

But we just smile because we're all high on laughing gas

Side by side, we all watch the smoke as it climbs

Up to new heights, suffocating the midnight sky

And we lose the will to fight, take my hand, it's time to die!

Welcome to the psychopath's masquerade

Here  heaven and hell are the same

Tonight we join the ranks of Hade's parade

And let Disaster play her favorite game

Author's Note

Is this a hit, a miss, or something in between? I'll leave you guys to decide!

Reviews

[Amber Lily]

I enjoyed this one because honestly, this can go on in anyone's mind! Some people just hid it better than others lol :)

[Lizardo]

A Hit, Totally hit I could picture myself from the perpective of this
Strong poem, For some reason it reminded me of ''Welcome to the jungle'' by Guns N Roses xD
Really good poem

[DoormanDan]

Lol, I reread it and I can see why you thought of that song. Thanks for the review :)

[Lizardo]

You are welcome :)

[Lusus Naturae]

I really liked this piece, as well as all of them actually. Truly, you are a create writer.

[DoormanDan]

Thanks for taking the time to pop over and read my writing! I appreciate it!

[Cool Girl]

I really did enjoy this! Great job:) Feel free to read any of my writing, and send read requests.

[DoormanDan]

I appreciate your review! I'll make sure I read your writing. You are a good writer!

[Cool Girl]

Thank you:)

[James McCoy]

This is one of the best pieces I've read on here! The flow is absolutely amazing! Two thumbs up!

[DoormanDan]

Thank you for the kind words! I'll make sure I check out some of your writing.

[Kyline Freed]

The flow for the poem is incedible! This poem was unique in so many ways and the wording was amazing. Great job!

[DoormanDan]

Thank you very much for the positive feedback! It really helps my confidence :)

[Valentine]

This is gruesome which I imagine you wanted it to be. I remember a relative of my family that lost his mind in the war and as weird as he was, heaven nor hell ever crossed his mind. Things were out to get him but we could never figure out what. Noises terrified him. Interesting read. Valentine

[DoormanDan]

Thanks for the review. I'm terribly sorry if this brought back some bad memories...

[Dannyisawriter]

Definitly a hit! I really liked this poem and you did a great job with the rhyming!!!!!

[DoormanDan]

Thanks for the positive feedback! I accepted your friend request.

[Lizzie Mitchell]

Hit! I enjoyed it! The font choice added a little something special to it!
I could hear it as screamo in my head ;D

[DoormanDan]

Thank you! I was inspired to write this(beat wise)by the song "Lights Out" by Breaking Benjamin. I was trying to add something special to it with the font, and I'm glad it worked!

[Lizzie Mitchell]

you're welcome
I just listened to it
good song!