If I Disappeared

I was just in the mood to write some dark/sad poetry when I wrote this: no need to worry, I don't really feel like this!

If I Disappeared

Can you look me straight in the iris of my eye

And tell me you would actually care if I died?

If I orchestrated the symphony of suicide

At my funeral would you even start to cry?

Would you even care at all?

If Death removed his black veil before me

If I were caught in Bloody Mary's gaze

Would you honestly say that you miss me

And let the sadness inside of you resonate?

If my time called, what would you do?

Tell me

If I were to one day disappear

Would you say it's not the same without me near?

Or would you just cry crocodile tears

And forget me by the birth of a brand new year?

Would you even notice if I disappeared?

Though you smile at me, in the chambers of my mind I feel

That secretly you wouldn't care if one day I don't get home

Maybe it's just my thoughts saying I don't deserve your love

I'm not sure at all, that's why I need to know

Would you even care if I disappeared

Would you even care if I disa

Author's Note

Sorry if this isn't as good as what I normally write. I've been in a bit of a rut as far as having inspiration lately.

Reviews

[Geo Lawrence]

are u sensing a failing relationship?
tell us, we need to know.

good work.

[DoormanDan]

Thanks! Theres no need to worry, only a small portion of the songs i write are actually about me, i just wrote this one because another song inspired me to do so.

[Alexis]

i would care :) your an awesome writer

[DoormanDan]

Thanks for the kind words:). But i dont really feel like this.

[Stephanie K.]

You are most definitely not in a rut! This is my favorite piece of yours by far. I am completely in awe by this poem. Please share your talent with me!

[DoormanDan]

Thank you for the honest review. I wasn't too sure about this poem at first, so thanks for boosting my confidence in it!

[DoormanDan]

And i personally think you are way more talented than i am!

[Stephanie K.]

Hahahaha! Well thank you, but my opinion will not change. Talent, is something you certainly have.