Day 1: Feelings

This is part of a series written about a forbidden love; Day 1 is the day after we received terrible news and everything changed.

I feel the wind

It's like you're whispering in my ear

I feel the sun

It's like the heat of your body

I hear the birds

It's like your voice

I feel the rain

It's like your tears

I hear the thunder

It's like your heart

I see the lightening

Like the energy that races through me when yr near

I feel your sorrow

I feel your pain

I feel your strength

Though you might not..yet

You are quite simply...amazing.

Is what I feel

Reviews

[KCthelastboyscout]

This is quite beautiful.there's underlying sadness to it as well.day 1 is off to a good start