See, this is my point. I just left a review on another poem about how everyone else seems to be writing love poems lately, haha. I'm going to take this as a sign that I need to write something related to love again, seeing as I haven't done so in months.
Anyways, I really like this. I like how short it is and how well you describe love in it. I feel like you could even leave the word "love" out of it, and it would still be obvious that it's about love, because it's so well written. Really great work. :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thanks Luna. I just posted this from a couple of years ago. So actually I didn't just write it. Than.. read moreThanks Luna. I just posted this from a couple of years ago. So actually I didn't just write it. Thanks very much for the great review
See, this is my point. I just left a review on another poem about how everyone else seems to be writing love poems lately, haha. I'm going to take this as a sign that I need to write something related to love again, seeing as I haven't done so in months.
Anyways, I really like this. I like how short it is and how well you describe love in it. I feel like you could even leave the word "love" out of it, and it would still be obvious that it's about love, because it's so well written. Really great work. :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thanks Luna. I just posted this from a couple of years ago. So actually I didn't just write it. Than.. read moreThanks Luna. I just posted this from a couple of years ago. So actually I didn't just write it. Thanks very much for the great review
nice...and especially the personification of "the easy breeze/ that softly combs our hair"---
in silence, real love speaks pretty loud---
j.
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thanks j, I am glad you liked it. As a rule I try to avoid love poems but this one seemed special to.. read moreThanks j, I am glad you liked it. As a rule I try to avoid love poems but this one seemed special to me.