the breeze

the breeze

A Poem by daniel lee johnson
"

the best advice I can give is to slow down as we travel this world

"

time goes by like fallen leaves
swiftly blown on the summer breeze
tumbling, spinning as they fly
across the great and infinite sky
sometimes I just sit and smile
and watch the clouds for just awhile



the breeze(c) 2013dlj

© 2015 daniel lee johnson


Author's Note

daniel lee johnson

thanks for reading and I apologize for failing to review more poetry these last few days. I shall make amends if you will kindly be patient with me for just a bit.

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i like that someone uses clouds in a positive way...they are beautiful to just sit and watch...and they make such interesting shapes...but we just don't pay enough attention to them for their beauty...we just think of storms, gloomy sky etc.

there are lots of things in life we don't appreciate enough.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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i like that someone uses clouds in a positive way...they are beautiful to just sit and watch...and they make such interesting shapes...but we just don't pay enough attention to them for their beauty...we just think of storms, gloomy sky etc.

there are lots of things in life we don't appreciate enough.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well written, this has terrific flow and pleasant message!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 13, 2015
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