dances

for a girl so far away

she dances
in a field of gold flowers
dancing, spinning
in delicate circles
her steps are pure love
never bruising a single petal

the flowers bow to her
in the rain scented breeze
as if she were a queen
the wind brushing her
long blonde hair
she dances for the day
and the joy it brings

dances(c)2012dlj

Author's Note

thanks for reading

Reviews

[RenMc]

This is so beautiful. It has a sense of light and ease. Love the way it makes me feel and how i can picture it effortlessly in my head

[daniel lee johnson]

thanks so much !!

[lenabean]

I love this poem! It is written with such tenderness. I especially love the line "in the rain scented breeze." That imagery (or whatever imagery is with smells) made me smile. Nice work, keep writing! :)

[daniel lee johnson]

hahaha I dont know what you call imagery in reference to smell either. I do appreciate your encouragement. I have to keep writing though, if I dont I think my head would explode.