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a red bird landed
on the branch
of a mulberry tree
outside my window
in the cold
it suddenly flew away
leaving me alone
in a world without birds

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Reviews

[Perkele.7885]

I would have liked to see a little more development in the poem before it ended. A lot of questions that I would like to ask but, I do not see any answers forthcoming from the existing information. What you wrote I liked but, it just wasn't enough!