Redirection

Hunted down 

by this Fred Bear of a day

Can no longer hide

the words I've needed to say

 

To this impervious dream 

I have been a whorin'

But like my favorite whiskey

these tears are a pourin' 

 

Eager to swallow down life

Soon regretting not tasting 

where would I be now

without those years of wasting

 

Compensation over contribution

this has been my greed.

Fill your belly with coins

and you too shal bleed. 

 

So now I take smaller bites,

savour each morsel I chew

and spend what I don't have

for the people I do. 

Reviews

[Patrick]

that last verse caps it all off nicely...'fred bear of day', i need to know what that means. Im thinking of thread bare but not sure if im right or wrong or just tired.
Good job.