Blood

Blood

A Poem by Danial Patrisk

Bang! Bullet Blood
Fills up fleshy flood
people people people
flowers in the mud

We are fettered free
in a jail without a key
with no reason no rhyme
count down from three:

Three two one "zero"
you're gonna be a hero
your corpse's rolling over
blood to and fro

Bang! Bullet Blood
Fills up fleshy flood
people people people
flowers in the mud

© 2013 Danial Patrisk


Author's Note

Danial Patrisk
anti-war lyrics

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I thought they were war lyrics.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very powerful. Great job. :)

100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 26, 2013
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Danial Patrisk
Danial Patrisk

Iran



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