Good Bye

Good Bye

A Poem by ghjckukc offcuo
"

I love you little sister.

"
one year my little sister
this night was all for you
I can't believe it's been so long
sometimes I still can't believe you're gone
one year my little sister
one year since you've been gone
one year my little sister
and I still can't say goodbye...
goodbye
I love you
I'll miss you forever
but I guess I should be moving on
I'll never forget you
I'll never forget the things you did for me
I'll never forget our memories
one year my little sister
and I still can't say goodbye...
goodbye

© 2011 ghjckukc offcuo


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Good Bye
(Review for Change the World Competition) I like the repeat of ‘One year my little sister’, depicts very well the feeling of your struggle coming to terms with that fact. There is a very good emotional honesty in this piece so very well done.


Posted 11 Years Ago


This is beauty and unfolds with great feeling, William. It made me reflect on someone who is gone from my life as well... I don't think we can ever say goodbye, I think we will move on, and I think the part of them that always touched us moves on with us, and the stronger we realize their touches still remain the easier we get at accepting the ache... hugs

Posted 13 Years Ago



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