Monsters

Monsters

A Poem by Dane V. Loviel

There is a monster
It is forever judging with many eyes.
Its tongue is bitter ash which spews nothing but lies.
Death on its mind and blood on its claws,
Loathsome in beauty it expounds all our flaws.
Corruption to the brink of insanity!
Ahh, we see the true colors of humanity.
Here comes the monster, so die with me,
Or fall victim to the monster of Society

© 2011 Dane V. Loviel


Author's Note

Dane V. Loviel
I wrote this years ago and am well aware of how much "angst" this seems to portray, so please don't bother mentioning it

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Hey
Dan V. Loviel

well, i like it, it is unique
It doesn't only speak about ''''angst''
but also about wisdom,
and how society has become,
nice write
isnt the last sentence supposed to be
Or be the victim of the monster Society?
well that is just my thought
Don't know bout it for sure


Greetz
Black

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Wonderful. I truly love this. I actually loathe you for writing it, but only out of pure jealousy ! (:

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hey
Dan V. Loviel

well, i like it, it is unique
It doesn't only speak about ''''angst''
but also about wisdom,
and how society has become,
nice write
isnt the last sentence supposed to be
Or be the victim of the monster Society?
well that is just my thought
Don't know bout it for sure


Greetz
Black

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 4, 2011
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I love to write, anything from poetry to short stories to simply recording my thoughts as they meander about our universe and what may transcend it. more..

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