Tears of Sorrow

A cold and bitter dark night
Unspoken words, unspoken thoughts
Under my infinite of sadness
Running through my soul

Beautiful pain is inside me now
Where sorrows and darkness grows
With a frozen thoughts,
Of a life without sense

A world of darkness
Makes me weak to fight
Feeling helpless and last
And start to destroy me inside

My heart is wet with tears
As the time standing still
Tears of blood falls from my heart
A hurt so deep...

A lot of pain, a lot of tears
Pain is the greatest but worst
This pain is a great and hard to hide
A great feeling called love.

Reviews

[sheriH 2]

Just beatifull i loved the words you used for this it was very touching.
-sheri

[shadow charm]

Thank you bennybooth i appreciate.

[BennyBooth]

It's the tears of sorrow that hurt so good.... Nice poem.. :)

[shadow charm]

Thank you shadow ember. Please also track every part my the story will share. Hoping you will like it too.

[Shadows Ember]

I really really like this. it shows how love is beautiful, but also very painful. Phenmenal write.