Charlie
Fly the plane
Unloved

Unloved

A Poem by Lizzy I

I am not your puppet
i have feelings too
anger, sadness, boredom
overcomes my fragile soul
i let myself be used
and in return use others
i fear rejection
and feel unloved
it feels like i`m falling
plunging into the darkness
it swallows me up
and spits me back out, broken
there is no end
to the empty loneliness
since he left
and walked away with my heart
never a chance
to move on from
never a chance
to be free

© 2011 Lizzy I


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lovely and shows true emotion
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Posted 12 Years Ago


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A very interesting and well written poem. It flowed very well and I got a good sense of the emotion behind it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Lovely expression of your insecure state of mind

Posted 13 Years Ago


it is very raw, like another reviewer remarked, and sometimes those types of pieces unguilded by rhetorical trappings can be the most honest, like a slap in the face.

it always astonishes me a bit when others can be so frank about utter dejection and emptiness.

Posted 13 Years Ago


This is beautiful; and so raw. Your pain just kinda seeps into the reader. It's so relatable - ha it got me thinking about my own experiences.


Posted 13 Years Ago


This reminds me of life in the modern world, until we become lost from the self and our happiness. These lines grabbed me the most:

"it feels like i`m falling
plunging into the darkness
it swallows me up
and spits me back out, broken"

A wonderful composition.


Posted 13 Years Ago



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Lizzy I
Lizzy I

Easton, PA



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