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I had never felt heartbreak

until the day you walked away

my mouth sealed with duct tape

nothing more that i could say

then blackness swirled around me

and i knew that i would fall

trapped in my minds own prison

with your name written across the wall

that god damn ball and chain

still wrapped around to strangle

now its my own self

that blades are meant to mangle

its become a wicked cycle

of always open doors

fifteen minute room checks

where they find you crying on the floor

and so my life has changed

into this hell of confusion

i need to find a way out

before there is nothing left to ruin

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[EMF]

Brilliant. Like being slapped on the back the head with a phone book. This poem leaves you reeling and stunned. IT goes at one hell of a pace, you 'have' to read it again to pick up the nuances and ideas. Absoluntely ####### brilliant