accepting maturity

I can’t live until tomorrow
I can’t wait until today
I can go but don’t you follow
Its better off this way
I can walk
But don’t copy me
Make your own path in this world
How am I to prove to you
That I`m not some little girl
I can take my own path
Give me space at the back of my heels
I can figure it out by myself
And show I`m more than real
I can leap, I can jump
Don’t catch I`m flying high
Lets show the others what I`m made of
Confidence to the sky

Reviews

[EricGodsil]

Line 4: its would need an apostrophe.

Whimsical. I like whimsical pieces. It also enjoy the optimistic upbeatness of it all. At least it is in my head. sorry about the punctuation correction. It really is the only critiquing I feel is necessary. Other than that the message here is clear and fun to follow. Overall, well done.

[Kaylor Mason]

This one is really good--"Confidence to the sky" that's my favorite part, I think. "I can't live until tomorrow, I can't wait until today"--that about sums up the teenage years, as I remember them. Nicely done

[New New]

I love every bit of this. Very well put together and I look forward to reading more of your work!

[Kelsey]

Really good work!
"But don’t copy me
Make your own path in this world
How am I to prove to you
That I`m not some little girl"
That had to be my favorite part of it. I can relate to it, and I think a lot of people can in one way or another. =) Nicely done!