Immortality

Immortality

A Poem by Lizzy I

The way your eyes are caring
The way your smile knows
The way you walk along the beach
Wiggling your toes
the way your hair trails
As you run across the sand
The way you never know
Who I really am
And if i discover you
Will you discover me?
A strengthened bond together
Immortality

© 2011 Lizzy I


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I find the simplicity and expression of this honest piece.

Well written!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nive wish, view and will....

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like the flow and how each line draws me in. Good job.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Lizzy I
Lizzy I

Easton, PA



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eccentric, and fun loving girl sixteen years old :) loves animals, especially dogs loves to dance, sing ,act ,and write i love to write poetry, it helps me express myself and get rid of all the ne.. more..

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